Last Breath and a Look at You

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Title: Last Breath and a Look at You
Genre: Orchestral pop / Cinematic ballad
Mood: Bittersweet, transcendent, emotional


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[Verse 1]
The sky fell silent, time stood still
Your shadow etched against the hill
I saw forever in your eyes
As mine began to close, slow like the tides

[Pre-Chorus]
The world fades out, but you shine through
The last thing I see… is you

[Chorus]
With my last breath and a look at you
The stars collapse, but love breaks through
Even death can’t steal this truth—
I lived forever in a moment with you


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[Verse 2]
The colors bled from every scene
But you were vivid, sharp, serene
A whispered name beneath the storm
You kept my soul from coming torn

[Bridge – instrumental swell with strings and heartbeat bass]
(Soft whisper)
Close your eyes — I’m still here
In the silence — feel me near


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[Final Chorus]
With my last breath and a look at you
Heaven wept, but we broke through
Time may end, but we remain true—
I lived forever in a moment with you


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